The Sharp Hook
By Hayley and Dylan (Rang a 3)
It was a beautiful, sunny day in the deep blue ocean. My best friend Spotty noticed a sharp, pointy, silver hook above us. He almost got hit by the silver hook but his best friend, me, saved him from the dangerous sharp hook! I felt really frightened when my best friend almost got killed by the evil killer fisherman.
I had a funny idea to put the stinky ugly sock on top of the sharp hook. I thought the killerman would be grumpy and very cranky.
